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3. the screwed up face
4. to smell the flowers
5. feeling life in the heat of fire
6. flew like a ship in red breeze
7. weak heart begins to ache
8. it's just another battle
9. the wind pushing our backs
10. who else will believe in you
11. constantly getting depressed
12. lit up by the shine ahead
13. the wind begins to blow
14. special seat for years
15. staying true to ourselves
16. to fly in that sky
17. the unmistakable feeling
18. just ignored it
19. the path without an answer
20. standing close to each other
21. the feelings that we used to share
22. where the clouds have broken
23. throw the bowling ball
24. leave your sadness behind
25. the weaknesses of yesterday
26. we step over the goal line
27. broken fragments of glass
28. tired of walking
29. waiting for the daybreak to come
30. the footsteps of courage
31. a utopia holding everything inside
32. things continue to change
33. I shouldn’t forget things so soon
4. to smell the flowers
5. feeling life in the heat of fire
6. flew like a ship in red breeze
7. weak heart begins to ache
8. it's just another battle
9. the wind pushing our backs
10. who else will believe in you
11. constantly getting depressed
12. lit up by the shine ahead
13. the wind begins to blow
14. special seat for years
15. staying true to ourselves
16. to fly in that sky
17. the unmistakable feeling
18. just ignored it
19. the path without an answer
20. standing close to each other
21. the feelings that we used to share
22. where the clouds have broken
23. throw the bowling ball
24. leave your sadness behind
25. the weaknesses of yesterday
26. we step over the goal line
27. broken fragments of glass
28. tired of walking
29. waiting for the daybreak to come
30. the footsteps of courage
31. a utopia holding everything inside
32. things continue to change
33. I shouldn’t forget things so soon
Hejka! Wrócisz do pisania? :D Bardzo podoba mi się to opowiadanie a długo takiego szukałam!
OdpowiedzUsuńJa również czekam na ciąg dalszy :)
OdpowiedzUsuńTwoje opowiadanie jest takie... przejmujące. Jedno z moich ulubionych o tej tematyce. Taknwspaniale operujesz ich emocjami, każde spojrzenie, dotyk, uśmiech - jestem w stanie to sobie wyobrazić. Rzadko czyta się tak dopracowane opowiadanie, naprawdę Szkoda byłoby je tak porzucić. Myślę że wielu fanów Twojego pisania czeka na ciąg dalszy. Ja również zaliczam się do tego grona :)
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